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Mensaje  Mar el Lun Sep 13, 2010 1:59 am

Dear:
I´ve recived your mails, and i´m so worried about you, i hope you be better. I never been in a similar situation but i think that the problem isn´t as bad as it seems, you just have to be kind and friendly with your neighbors.
You have to make friends, i know this looks so difficult but it isn´t. Maybe you have to start make visits, you can bring some of cookies or a little bit of cake.
i hope that this advice can it help you
take care
With love Mar

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Mensaje  karen I.Pérez Cervantes el Lun Sep 13, 2010 10:15 am

hi mar
her editting is very very good, is a very advice I never would think about.
Always is good have friends, also you can organiza a party and invite a olds friends and new friends, your gramar is good. kiss and hugs
karen isabel Laughing

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Mensaje  Admin el Mar Sep 14, 2010 1:51 am

Hi Karen,
Very Happy That´s very good! You gave advice your friend Mar, but next tiem don´t make changes to the given list because you make me feel confused, Wink . Because it´s supposed that you needed to edit Monica´s work, anyway, you did it correctly.
Very good, lol!
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