Activity 4: E-mail giving an advice to a friend.
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Activity 4: E-mail giving an advice to a friend.
Dear Sam:
I'm sorry you feel this way, lonely and depressed, but I think you can find a solution because your problem it's not so bad.
Why you should do is go to a pub and try to make frieds, I'm sure you are goning to find some.
Why don't you join a club? maybe a futball club for example, that will make you know new people and then you could find friends.
Also you could buy a pet, I don't know maybe a cat or a dog and what about a fish? If you do this I'm sure you won`t feel alone anymore.
Please write soon and tell me how you're getting on.
Why you should do is go to a pub and try to make frieds, I'm sure you are goning to find some.
Why don't you join a club? maybe a futball club for example, that will make you know new people and then you could find friends.
Also you could buy a pet, I don't know maybe a cat or a dog and what about a fish? If you do this I'm sure you won`t feel alone anymore.
Please write soon and tell me how you're getting on.
Take care
Sandy.
Sandy.
Sandybells- New
- Mensajes : 11
Fecha de inscripción : 06/09/2010
Edad : 34
Activity 4: E-mail giving an advice to a friend.
Miss Senia, like Sandy, my partner did not publish his work in the forum, I could not wait, so I did the activity of Sandra.
Dear Sam:
I'm sorry you feel this way, lonely and depressed, but I think you can find a solution because your problem it's not so bad.
Why you should do is go to a pub and try to make frieds, I'm sure you are goning (Spelling) to find some.
Why don't you join a club? maybe a futball club for example, that will make you know new people and then you could find friends.
Also you could buy a pet, I don't know maybe a cat or a dog and what about a fish? If you do this I'm sure you won`t feel alone anymore.
Please write soon and tell me how you're getting on.
Take care
Sandy.
Very good Sandy, you have only a mistake. It's a job well done, as always. I think your advice is clear and also give many options to Sam that he could do.
I really like your advice.
Dear Sam:
I'm sorry you feel this way, lonely and depressed, but I think you can find a solution because your problem it's not so bad.
Why you should do is go to a pub and try to make frieds, I'm sure you are goning (Spelling) to find some.
Why don't you join a club? maybe a futball club for example, that will make you know new people and then you could find friends.
Also you could buy a pet, I don't know maybe a cat or a dog and what about a fish? If you do this I'm sure you won`t feel alone anymore.
Please write soon and tell me how you're getting on.
Take care
Sandy.
Very good Sandy, you have only a mistake. It's a job well done, as always. I think your advice is clear and also give many options to Sam that he could do.
I really like your advice.
Mónica Cuellar Bocardo- New
- Mensajes : 12
Fecha de inscripción : 04/09/2010
Edad : 34
Activity 5: Peer editing
Mony, I thought she posted the editing activity, but I really appreciate your honesty.
Thanks, , You did it very well! Obviously, I´ll give u the credit to u. . So it´s in that way. You=5 activities. Sandy=4, ok?
Cu!
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