CORRECTING MISTAKES.
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CORRECTING MISTAKES.
Incorrect text:
Dear Fiona, (P)
Well, here I am (Gr) in the sunny islands of the Caribbean, enjoying the marvellous weatherthat (Sp) is much hoter (WW) than in England in (Gr) the moment. I am in Martinique, the larger (Gr) of the Windward islands in the,(P) Eastern Caribbean. There is no point to try to call me. My mobile phone is aout (Sp) of order. The sandy beaches are the beautifullest (WW). I have ever seen (P) and the food is superb! I can´t to (Gr) stop eating. I´ve bought lots of souvenirs! My suitcases will be much heavyer (Sp) becuase (Sp) I´ve bought you so many presents! See you in a week.
Love,
Clara
Correct text:
Dear Fiona:
Well, I am here in the sunny islands of the Caribbean, enjoying the marvellous weather that is hotter than in England at the moment. I am in Martinique, the largest of the Windward islands in the Eastern Caribbean. There is no point to try to call me. My mobile phone is out of order. The sandy beaches are the most beautiful. I have ever seen, and the food is superb! I can´t stop eating. I´ve bought lots of souvenirs! My suitcases will be much heavier because I´ve bought you so many presents! See you in a week.
Love,
Clara
Dear Fiona, (P)
Well, here I am (Gr) in the sunny islands of the Caribbean, enjoying the marvellous weatherthat (Sp) is much hoter (WW) than in England in (Gr) the moment. I am in Martinique, the larger (Gr) of the Windward islands in the,(P) Eastern Caribbean. There is no point to try to call me. My mobile phone is aout (Sp) of order. The sandy beaches are the beautifullest (WW). I have ever seen (P) and the food is superb! I can´t to (Gr) stop eating. I´ve bought lots of souvenirs! My suitcases will be much heavyer (Sp) becuase (Sp) I´ve bought you so many presents! See you in a week.
Love,
Clara
Correct text:
Dear Fiona:
Well, I am here in the sunny islands of the Caribbean, enjoying the marvellous weather that is hotter than in England at the moment. I am in Martinique, the largest of the Windward islands in the Eastern Caribbean. There is no point to try to call me. My mobile phone is out of order. The sandy beaches are the most beautiful. I have ever seen, and the food is superb! I can´t stop eating. I´ve bought lots of souvenirs! My suitcases will be much heavier because I´ve bought you so many presents! See you in a week.
Love,
Clara
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