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YARID SILVA Mar Sep 14, 2010 12:44 am

Hello Mony...

How are you?, I hope that very well.

In general I like your advice, although I think it would be best to start with a small meeting and not a party, you know, sam is new to the neighborhood and do not know what kind of people are around, you always have to be careful .

I really like what the music really is that I love dancing, I think it's one of my favorite hobbies.

See you next Friday

You're very well .

**Admin** Mar Sep 14, 2010 2:08 am

Good Yarid!,
Your comment is great. Good advice!, you missed only the error correction from other´s work. Anyway, it´s perfect.
Only a question?

Whay did you talk about your music? I didn´t get the idea! Question

But Good!,
TXen

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