Exercise 5, Correct a Friend

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Exercise 5, Correct a Friend

Mensaje  Paumorez el Lun Sep 13, 2010 4:03 pm

My dear Richie!

In your e-mail you are so cool friend , your advices are so functional, but you maybe should revise the Spelling, because you wrote three wrong words , perhaps it´s for the time you take to write, don´t u?

See you tomorrow.

Pau
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Activity 5: Peer editing

Mensaje  Admin el Mar Sep 14, 2010 1:58 am

I love you Dear Paula,
You are the only one who did the activity as it´s supposed to be. You needed to revise if the other´s work had the elements about giving advice, the phrases used, and if the other also explained his/her reasons for giving advice. Wink In the same way, you revise the "mistakes".

Perfect my dear,
Continue in that way,

TXen lol!
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