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Mensaje  Briseida Barrón González el Lun Sep 13, 2010 2:11 pm

Mariel your tips are great fun, are great, might I suggest something similar, such as:

Dear Friend:

Do not get discouraged, you're a nice person.
What you should do is to give gifts to their neighbors, such as chocolate cake or something, organizing a party, buy beer, junk food and put a match futball, remember when I was new to the neighborhood?, I did a party and after then the whole neighborhood was there, or you can go with the neighbor and tell you how the kid from 8, ¿am I could give a cup of sugar? or more things until I know you well.

I hope this post can help you and do not forget that I miss you a lot.

Good job just a little estructuctura

Briseida Barrón González
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Mensaje  Admin el Mar Sep 14, 2010 1:39 am

lol! Good Briseida,
Continue in that way, practicing and participating. Remember that practice is = fluency. Smile
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