Activity 4: E-mail giving an advice to a friend.

Ir abajo

Activity 4: E-mail giving an advice to a friend.

Mensaje  Sandybells el Lun Sep 13, 2010 11:42 am

Dear Sam:

I'm sorry you feel this way, lonely and depressed, but I think you can find a solution because your problem it's not so bad.
Why you should do is go to a pub and try to make frieds, I'm sure you are goning to find some.
Why don't you join a club? maybe a futball club for example, that will make you know new people and then you could find friends.
Also you could buy a pet, I don't know maybe a cat or a dog and what about a fish? If you do this I'm sure you won`t feel alone anymore.

Please write soon and tell me how you're getting on.

Take care
Sandy.
avatar
Sandybells
New
New

Mensajes : 11
Fecha de inscripción : 06/09/2010
Edad : 28

Ver perfil de usuario

Volver arriba Ir abajo

Activity 4: E-mail giving an advice to a friend.

Mensaje  Mónica Cuellar Bocardo el Lun Sep 13, 2010 8:32 pm

Miss Senia, like Sandy, my partner did not publish his work in the forum, I could not wait, so I did the activity of Sandra.

Dear Sam:


I'm sorry you feel this way, lonely and depressed, but I think you can find a solution because your problem it's not so bad.
Why you should do is go to a pub and try to make frieds, I'm sure you are goning (Spelling) to find some.
Why don't you join a club? maybe a futball club for example, that will make you know new people and then you could find friends.
Also you could buy a pet, I don't know maybe a cat or a dog and what about a fish? If you do this I'm sure you won`t feel alone anymore.

Please write soon and tell me how you're getting on.



Take care
Sandy.


Very good Sandy, you have only a mistake. It's a job well done, as always. I think your advice is clear and also give many options to Sam that he could do.
I really like your advice. Very Happy

Mónica Cuellar Bocardo
New
New

Mensajes : 12
Fecha de inscripción : 04/09/2010
Edad : 28

Ver perfil de usuario

Volver arriba Ir abajo

Activity 5: Peer editing

Mensaje  Admin el Mar Sep 14, 2010 1:45 am

Shocked
Mony, I thought she posted the editing activity, but I really appreciate your honesty.
Thanks, lol! , You did it very well! Obviously, I´ll give u the credit to u. Smile. So it´s in that way. You=5 activities. Sandy=4, ok?
Cu! Wink
avatar
Admin
Admin
Admin

Mensajes : 30
Fecha de inscripción : 02/08/2010

Ver perfil de usuario http://english5.activo.mx

Volver arriba Ir abajo

Re: Activity 4: E-mail giving an advice to a friend.

Mensaje  Contenido patrocinado


Contenido patrocinado


Volver arriba Ir abajo

Volver arriba

- Temas similares

 
Permisos de este foro:
No puedes responder a temas en este foro.