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Dear Fiona

Mensaje  Antonio el Dom Sep 12, 2010 8:49 pm

Correcting Mistakes
By Antonio Jiménez | Task 03
Original Letter

Dear Fiona,

Well, here I am in the sunny islands of the Caribbean, enjoying the marvellous weather that is much hoter than in England in the moment. I am in Martinique, the larger of the Windward islands in the, Eastern Caribbean. There is no point to try to call me. My mobile phone is aout of order. The sandy beaches are the beautifullest I have ever seen and the food is superb! I can't to stop eating. I've bought lots of souvenirs! My suitcases will be much heavyer because I've bought you so many presents! See you in a week.
Love,

Clara

Detected Mistakes

Dear Fiona,(P)

Well, here I am (MP) in the sunny islands(UE) of the Caribbean,(P/WO) enjoying the marvellous(Sp) weather that is much hoter(Gr) than in England in(WW) the moment(WO). I am in Martinique, the larger(Gr) of the Windward islands(UE) (MW) in the,(P) Eastern Caribbean.There is no point to try(UW) to call me. My mobile phone is aout(Sp) of order. (PH) The sandy beaches are the beautifullest(Gr) I have ever seen and the food is superb! I can't to stop(Gr) eating. I've bought lots of souvenirs! My suitcases will be much heavyer (UT) because I've bought(RW) you so many presents!(UE) See you in a week.

Love, (PH)

Clara (MP)
P Punctuation | MP Missing Punctuation | Sp Spelling | UW Unnecesary Word | MW Missing Word | WO Word Order | RW Repeated Word | Gr Grammar | UE Use of English | UT Unfinished Thought | PH Pharagraphing
Final Letter
Dear Fiona:
Well, here I am, in the sunny Caribbean Islands enjoying the marvelous weather that at the moment is hotter than in England. I am in Martinique, the largest of the Windward Islands located in the Eastern Caribbean. Here there is no point to call me. My mobile phone is out of order.
The sandy beaches are the most beautiful I have ever seen and the food is superb! I can’t stop eating. I’ve bought lots of souvenirs! My suitcases will be heavier when I return because I have many presents for you! See you in a week.
Love, Clara.

Antonio
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